Feedback on first draft

Here we have some filled out sheets of feedback from our classmates on our trailer. These include possible improvements we could make, range of shots we need to include, whether our sound and image was synchronised etc. This feedback has really helped us as we are using this to improve our trailer and developing and improving on weak areas. We were also were able to recognize weather the trailer was suitable for our target audience which it was, therefore motivating us further.

From this feedback we are going to focus on making the storyline and setting clear at the beginning of the trailer and working in our range of camera shots and jump cuts. We are also going to ensure that we have suitable music as the survey revealed that the audiences wanted more sound in the trailer. Additionally, it was obvious that the audience did not fully understand the plot with comments such as "I don't get the opening bit" We are now going to film more footage of the scientist explaining the plot more so that they are able to understand and appreciate the trailer.